
Prophet Song by Paul Lynch
My rating: 2.5 of 5 stars
Paul Lynch‘s Prophet Song, which won the Booker Prize in 2023, follows the general rules of a horror story, with Ireland’s descent into brutal authoritarianism serving as the source of the terror. The plot focuses on Eilish, a molecular biologist at a biotech company whose husband is involved in the teachers’ union. As the country falls under the control of an authoritarian regime, he comes under government scrutiny for a planned protest march. As in a horror novel, the situation keeps getting worse and worse. And Eilish continually makes bad choices that put her and her children at risk.
The prose is dense, with no paragraph breaks and long, winding sentences. I recently finished another book that uses a similar technique, Satantango by the Nobel prize-winning Hungarian author László Krasznahorkai. Whereas Krasznahorkai uses this style to make you feel drenched in the rain and mired in the mud that permeates the landscape, Lynch undermines the claustrophobic effect he’s creating with breathlessly lyrical, propulsive prose that keep driving you forward. The sentences seem to tumble so forcefully at times, you’re almost compelled to skim.
I also found the metaphor-laden writing style distracting. It was vivid and beautiful at times, but often became as numbing as the situation Eilish finds herself in. It also gets too repetitious. Lynch repeatedly describes the darkness that is consuming her. “Dark’ and its variations are used relentlessly. According to my e-reader, it appeared more than 150 times.
What lifts this above a genre novel is the question of why Eilish doesn’t leave when she has clear chances to. In traditional horror, such choices are often left unexplained or excused as someone just making bad choices. This novel challenges the reader to ask what they would do. Eilish herself is presented as something of a void. Her thoughts and feelings are heavily abstracted through the symbolic writing. As the story progresses, you don’t understand why she makes the choices she does. She often seems to be in shock and completely out of it, but then unexpectedly acts decisively. Still, she won’t leave when it’s the obvious choice.
Many people around the world live through such horrors because they have no choice. They’re not able to escape. I’m not sure what Lynch was getting at with Eilish’s story. While the novel was gripping and upsetting, it crucially never addresses the why of the events around them. Why has this society descended into such cruel madness? Even the conflict raging around them is never explained, just accepted. The details were presumably left out to make the situation seem universal, but without filling in such blanks, it’s hard for the reader to seriously consider the question of why people like Eilish choose to stay.
Prophet Song gives no answers, which would be okay, but I’m not even sure what questions it was trying to raise. I also wish the end were better thought out. Without giving anything away, while it was somewhat satisfying emotionally, it grew trite upon reflection and, in a way, was almost as dismissive of the characters as the authoritarian regime was.









